On Wednesday 13th August 2014 the Year Fours were lucky enough to visit the Amherst Village Library to meet local author, Raewyn Caisley.
Raewyn is a children’s author who lives close by in Fremantle. She has worked as a primary school teacher and has always had a lot of fun with her class during writing time! Raewyn has met a lot of great characters in her life, some of whom are the inspiration for her books.
During our visit, Raewyn explained that she uses her ‘real life’ experiences and feelings to create stories and this helps her to bring her stories to life! She shared with us some personal stories that meant a lot to her, as well as some of the inspiration she has used from her personal life for ideas to write her stories.
During our visit Raewyn gave us some fantastic ideas and tips to help us make our writing “sparkle”. Some of her tips were:
• You need to “hug a fat secret”
• Keep it simple
• Use your own words
• Choose the right details
• Keep it real
• Show, don’t tell
• Include real feelings
The Year Fours are now looking forward to applying Raewyn’s advice to their own narrative writing. We hope to share some of our creative stories with you soon.
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Year Four Gold began the term by celebrating National Diabetes Week. To learn more about diabetes we watched two ‘Behind the News’ stories and then participated in a variety of integrated literacy tasks. The topic was also picked up in the student’s Health Lesson with Mr Davis. Later we also worked collaboratively in small groups and used a simple and familiar tune to create a song about diabetes, that will hopefully help to educate others about this serious health issue. We are currently adding the final finishing touches to our songs and look forward to sharing them at our 3-way interviews.
Congratulations to all our House Cross Country winners for 2014 – a fabulous effort! Congratulations also to all students who gave it their very best and finished off their race, earning valuable points for their House team.
The Interschool Team will head off next Thursday to compete between our regional Catholic Primary schools at Tomato Lake. Please make sure your child’s Bus Permission Slip is signed and returned ASAP, thank you.
A special thank you to Mr Davis for organising Cross Country training over the last number of weeks – very generous use of your free time and greatly appreciated in our lead up to the event.
1st Gannon – 139 points
2nd Mazenod – 129 points
3rd De Vialar – 121 points
4th Mackillop – 91 points
In the next few weeks staff will be inserviced regarding placing posts on the school website.
We will let you know when these are up and running so stay tuned!